The Milestone By Samreen Firdaus

The Milestone

  • Creativity and Originality
  • Poetic Style and Language
  • Emotional Impact
  • Theme and Message
  • Readers Appreciation
3.7/5Overall Score

Cast The Charm

Isn’t it better to make lively hues
In the sombre firmament of your mind
An adorable view is hidden within you
In the total darkness, how can you find?

Isn’t it better to pave your path
Even if no one gives you a hand
I see the spring just next to you
When the dried leaves are buried in the sand.

Isn’t it better to put the armour on
And forge a sharp and silver arrowhead
Shoot every barrier that is in your way
Instead of shedding tears lying in the bed.

Isn’t it better to veer off course
When you discover the alley is blind
Isn’t it better to shatter all the doubts
Wherever in your soul those are lined.

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    • That’s very kind of you. Every word of yours bloomed a world of enthusiasm in my heart. These words give a lot of stability to keep going with my pen.

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